Your Son Is Dead

Posted: 2003-03-20 3:24 p.m.   Report Abuse I normaly don't be like this but...


it was Very short, it seem it was a buch of Boxes connected to gather

enemys where all light weights, even the last 'strong'one...

you should of spent atlest 2 or 3 more days on this to make it longer,and/or put more deatil

I'll give a 3 for effort

Posted: 2003-03-21 10:38 a.m.   Report Abuse Boys and Girls, well mostly boys. We have boxes, but not just any boxes we have large boxes, but thats not all, they are connected by, yep thats right, BOXES. No no wait thats not all, we have textures, too. Yes One texture pur room. I give it a 3 for effort.

Posted: 2003-03-21 11:08 a.m.   Report Abuse What the above posters said.
Plus the fact that the boss, took more shots then there was ammo in the entire level, forcing you to use a saber, which with the lack of Jedi-ishness forced into taking alot of damage (having to be close and thus not able to dodge fire).

I encourage the author to use JED instead of JKedit. It's free, has more potential, more options, and in the end is alot easier to use.

Posted: 2003-03-21 11:29 a.m.   Report Abuse Ok I'm not going to leave you a comment that tells you that you did bad and not leave you some advice. First of all swich to JED, it is a lot less hard. Trust me im in 7th grade and I use JED. 2nd of all, use more textures. One texture pur room is lame. It's just a matter of finding the right one that is hard. 3rd of all, whats with that gold door. Very bad use of cog, it creates a very bad HOM. And Finaly, try making multiplayer levels. All of the famous ones make multiplayer levels. And to me it's a lot less harder and and more fun. So give it a try and dont give up on it.

Posted: 2003-03-21 4:55 p.m.   Report Abuse I have to agree with everything except for the last comment. MP levels are fine, but we have more MP levels then we need (a couple of thousand) In my personal oppinion things that could be done better that are not previously mentioned. More elaborate Plot. "you son is dead, now kill the guy that killed him." Even telling us how he died, our how we got the message that he died would help the storyline. Second Better placement of Items. Good items need to be hard to find, where as poor ammo and such should be relitvly easy to find.

Posted: 2003-03-22 1:20 p.m.   Report Abuse THU_Bloodinator, does AKPiggot make MLP levels? Nope didnt think so.

Posted: 2003-03-22 7:16 p.m.   Report Abuse Darth dude, do I know who AKPiggot is? No didn't think so. Do I care? No. To me the best SP level author is Wolfy.

Posted: 2003-03-22 7:25 p.m.   Report Abuse I did not like this level at all I'm giving you a 3 for trying but man this needs work.

Posted: 2003-03-23 10:09 p.m.   Report Abuse I'm sorry but this level could have used a lot of work. HOM is REALLY bad to have! I agree next time go with JED. In my short-lived attempts to edit JK I used JKEdit then I switched to JED because it's really that much better. Also it's way to short and the boss at the end doesn't really fight he just stands there and takes a beating. Next time try and make it challenging plz! Thanks! I'll be looking forward to your next level. Until then!

Posted: 2003-03-26 9:25 a.m.   Report Abuse THU_Bloodinator said, "Darth dude, do I know who AKPiggot is? No didn't think so. Do I care? No. To me the best SP level author is Wolfy."

I am going to start to laugh and continue to laugh until you close the window. Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha...

Posted: 2003-03-26 7:25 p.m.   Report Abuse I'll laugh with you...Bwuahahahaha!!
Don't use so many LEC textures! and really whay everyone else said.

Posted: 2003-04-17 12:23 p.m.   Report Abuse Playing this level was like drinking break fluid, it left me with a burning sensation in my colin, but that might have been lunch. Now, I'm a lieniant guy. I like new things, and I like old things. This is both, and i don't like it that much. I have dozens of levels that I refuse to post, because they are hard, easy, or blan, but I got better; and have a level that ,the others that I multiplay with and I, think is very good. If you are still willing to make more levels, then here are some serious guidelines for level making:

1.) People need eyecandy. They feel the level is incomplete without something shiney.
2.) Make it stand out from the rest of the crowd. There are many awsome levels. Some are serious, but there are some hideous levels that are great, because of little one-liners, or very strange situations.
3.) Make up your own charicters, or recreate something, don't just do the old "[(Jedi*Sith*Lightsaber*Sith*Revenge*Death)]", people just can't handle playing the same thing, only renamed.
4.) Your description was very blan. I'm suprised I downloaded it in the first place, because of it. You were to the point with what the storyline was, but people like to see what happened, not told.
*2/10*
Please try again, ***you have potential.***

Posted: 2003-08-14 6:00 a.m.   Report Abuse AKPiggot is my JK God, ok? Dude, he is the master, and he does SP. So don't talk about MP. First off, MP is *easier*. No enemy placement needed, no plotlines, no extensive levels. Just a fancy place to fight. Second off, as was previously stated, there are thousands of MP levels, because of this very fact.

Now, I am not dissing on the MP masters, because there are some that have created truly great levels. I'm not saying what they did was easy. But making a brilliant SP takes far more skill.

Don't give up dude that designed this level. This was pretty bad, I gotta agree, but it's about the level I started (and never passed) at. My cogs are just as messed up, I am glad to see I'm not the only one. Your door cog made me laugh, cause I feel your pain. I tried making a door, and the door, instead of just sliding up, like a good door, soars across the room and out another door. I have yet to find anyone who can explain this to me, and that's the entire reason I gave up JK editing. :(

OK, sorry, still bummed about that. BUT, keep working on this. Something that is *very* important to me is storyline. If you have an involved plot, I will rate you high even if the design isn't too good, whereas if the design is good but there's no storyline I won't be impressed. But creative and well done design AND an inventive storyline is what makes you a master. Remember that.

Posted: 2023-06-02 1:30 p.m.   Report Abuse I gave this level a 6/10. Probably could have been lower but I'm trying to be as positive as I can. I am not a creator myself so I admire your work. Making your own levels to an existing videogame doesn't so like an easy task so, I like the work you put in. So, A for effort.

But there were many flaws to this level. But 1st I'll compliment the storyline. It may not be much but I'm a sucker for a good revenge story. I like that the main character kills the guy who killed his son. That sounds like justice to me. But now its time for some ideas:

. The end boss was a tank to kill. He has a lot of HPs. For a nobody, I don't think he should be that powerful. It's not like he's a sith lord or jedi master. He's just a guy.

. Lack of story. We never saw the son. We don't know anything about the characters or the setting. You could explain a lot more.

Those are 2 areas you can improve on but it's decent. It could be better but it could have been worse. So, it wasn't a bad level. I'd say it's worth the download.