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Metropolis

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This map is my second and it is not cubic this time. It has good lighting and enemies now move. Music was also added. There is a maze that you have to do, if you get stuck, e-mail me for help.

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Metropolis

File Size:

1.6 MiB

Date:

2003-01-28

Author:

Gavin Walsh

Downloads:

1892

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DSettahr

Posted: 2003-01-28 2:40 p.m. Report Abuse

Not really worth anyones time, unless you're bored with nothing better to do.

The architecture was very blocky, and there was quite a few HOM errors. Not too mention, the story line was lacking; this is just another 'fight a bunch of reborn, and then finally tavion and desann' level.

Keep practicing though... Better luck on your next level.

Dentian

Posted: 2003-01-28 2:42 p.m. Report Abuse

I gave it a four because you're obviously new at mapping, and though it shows, it's also apparent that you put a lot of work into this level. I'll stick to constructive criticism for once...

Though you say the rooms aren't boxy, that's just what all the rooms are. Big boxes with a centerpiece or two, and elongated boxes connecting them as hallways. The lighting is very...erm...shall we say, incomplete? There are a lot of open faces on the walls, and you can see a few in only the first room. The maze is just like the hallways mentioned above. You did do some cool scripting though.

Just keep practicing man, it's lookin' good. :)

gavin walsh

Posted: 2003-01-29 8:31 a.m. Report Abuse

i apolisgise to all the people who downloaded this level who thought it was complete rubbish (hey try and download emperor of doom its worse :D)

but come on im only 11 years old what do you exepect something like ''The Emperor's Courthouse'' id tryed my best i really did and im sure that my maps will get better.

gavin walsh

Posted: 2003-01-29 8:31 a.m. Report Abuse

DSettahr

Posted: 2003-01-29 10:20 a.m. Report Abuse

I'm sure they will get better, and I agree, there are far worse levels out there. So keep at it, read the tutorials, post screenshots of your work in the showcase forum for suggestions on how to make it better, and remember to keep practicing. :)

zizzy34

Posted: 2003-01-29 1:46 p.m. Report Abuse

kindof fun to play, not bad for a beginner, keep them coming

gavin walsh

Posted: 2003-01-30 8:20 a.m. Report Abuse

its about time someone enjoyed palying it thankyou :D, zizzy34

Jedi Knight_Joshua

Posted: 2003-01-31 2:14 p.m. Report Abuse

Not bad 9.Thats high because of the effort put into it.

gavin walsh

Posted: 2003-02-01 6:23 a.m. Report Abuse

thankyou for the comment Jedi Knight_Joshua, but if you are going to rate it will you actually rate in the comment thankyou :)

ENSIGN

Posted: 2003-02-01 9:16 a.m. Report Abuse

looks good. beter than i can do .I can't get JK editing out of my mind. JO is so strange to edit. glad you can get the hang of it. supose itsbecause you have no old ways to hang onto.

I thimk it would be alot better if you put something (anythin) on the walls.

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Dark_Saber

Posted: 2003-02-04 2:54 p.m. Report Abuse

Good job. Even though it could use lots of improvement, this is a good start for a beginner. Hey, it's better than I can do! I can't even edit JK1

gavin walsh

Posted: 2003-02-05 9:20 a.m. Report Abuse

thankyou for that dark_saber

Dark_Saber

Posted: 2003-02-07 8:10 p.m. Report Abuse

no sweat, gavin. I just give my two cents, and thats all! I've tried making a map, but I just can't get it to work! I've almost done it on Jk1, but that's just me.

gavin walsh

Posted: 2003-02-08 3:06 a.m. Report Abuse

im sure your jk1 editing will go fine dark_saber

p.s if you think this level is bad try getting ''emperor of doom'' the other one i did its SUCKS.

Heke7

Posted: 2003-02-14 10:33 a.m. Report Abuse

You are improving all the time at editing. Good work!

gavin walsh

Posted: 2003-02-15 2:25 a.m. Report Abuse

thanks heke7 i tried my best

SnakeMan

Posted: 2023-09-22 4:55 p.m. Report Abuse

I gave you a 10 just as a boost. If I was more critical, I'd say your level is around an 7 or an 8. After reading the rest of the comments, I think there's being too harsh for an 11 YO at the time of making this level.

Pros:
. Maze was interesting.
. Plot... kinda
. Fun
. Time
. Space
. Etc.

Overall, pretty good level. Worth a try.